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Something From Me ..

By icloudbitch6969 November 10, 2020 8 answers Last updated November 10, 2020

(1) You are beautiful again. A masterpiece. And it looks like you cried again. They betray your eyes if you choke them in tears. If I returned the time, I would ask for forgiveness. If it wasn't, I would have forgiven you at your feet. And to shout in the winds that I swear to your love. That for you I will be a knight ready to die for your honor. Now we are just a memory, now we are just the past. Coals have long since cooled down, even if there has been a fire. It used to burn somewhere. He burned everything in his path to ashes, and we burned in it and we were reduced to ashes. And you are tenderness Yes you are tenderness (2) (2) I am just a tree, stopping with the crown of the wind. And the wind is gentle, bringing with it the change. You don't stop shedding tears, you couldn't swallow the parting. It's my fault, remember I promised it was just the two of us. It is not enough that I killed you, but you are looking for the blind cause. The reason is in me, understand, so that you tremble all over. You are the girl who found the strong white spark in me ... Now the tree is where you and I were sitting. The fire went through me, I found a letter on the lawn. You were in it too. He only loved me in the summer. I gave you a shadow, didn't you, the whole love had burned all over. Summer is over, flooding the meadow with snow. The letter went find and read how I waited for the two of us.

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cam_newbz answered · November 10, 2020

   I just really like it. Keep writing and share what you have written.

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turmadamonica answered · November 10, 2020

   It is beautiful :)

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pschmeichel1 answered · November 10, 2020

   Beautifully written with many feelings. After loving her and waiting for her, why did you let her cry? I liked how much love you described your beloved ... Unfortunately, the truest and strongest love is impossible. Beautifully written, with a soul ... I liked it

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zloprase123 answered · November 10, 2020

   Another MASTERPIECE! One girl

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delinaxo answered · November 10, 2020

   Boulevard poetry is very cool

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hothornylover answered · November 10, 2020

   It becomes a chalga text.

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kiracharm answered · November 10, 2020

   Thank you all! I didn't let her cry, her parents had a wrong idea about me. They were much richer than me. They told her I wasn't for her ... and she responded. : by the author M19

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comely_bb answered · November 10, 2020

   Nice speech, a bit banal, however, tears, memories, knights memorized phrases. Either you don't read poetry at all, or you overdo it.