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2 cristalcastles answered
Cool story, but you seem to be fantasizing a bit. Otherwise there is nothing wrong! Dreams are free!
3 rhett9421 answered
... and then he woke up .. ahahhashh
4 ArraBella22 answered
Laughter in the hall: D this is a pure soap opera: D: D great imagination, great snobbery, great miracle: D but I laughed well: D
5 lee_underpass answered
you sheltered the girl well, but in such luxury she can be lonely, take her and keep me company
6 subbylucario answered
Tell your people to stop the internet, that ... tragedy is simple; x: D A. S5
7 victoriasecretangels answered
You messed up the chick tab, this is for "Fictional Stories"
8 alohastang answered
Shouldn't this be in Fictional Stories?
9 JemieXX answered
too good to be true!
10 AjaMissy answered
Then let me come and ask, and you will give me so many things: D: D: D Please, get out of the movie: x
11 EllaSweety answered
Go out a little and make friends. As long as you're a zombie and fantasize about novels
12 apolojack answered
I imagine how boring you are and how many complexes you have to write such things ...
13 Lorelay answered
how do you know he's lying I'm a girl of 12 and no, I'm not prone to nonsense, but just with a heart .... I think it's true you did very well thank people like you
14 daddysbigboy21 answered
You seem to have gone too far with the Disney princesses and now you are fantasizing .. Let me just ask after you shelter her in the penthouse did she wake up from your dreams
15 _chicca_ answered
She's not lying! I am her neighbor and when I go up to the 4th floor of my house, I see her house. Well, I have to get up a little, because the age-old redwoods interfere with my view, but soon I plan to award them in the northeastern part of the garden, and in their place to put Mediterranean palm trees.
16 keepin answered
but before the bath you had to bathe it with the fire hose because then the dirty bath we found how they were my hihihi that with clogged holes malei. ehh and they are like cooking these ribs until next summer you will smell the luxury apartment curtains duvets and clothes of greasy pigs. in an apartment of people from the middle class in the west I have not heard and seen cooking except for Christmas something exceptional, let alone in yours from the upper class hihihih.
17 kendoll_16 answered
Fri you will become a great poet! But at least write that you are composing ... everything sounds unreal: d 1 that no Bulgarian would return to Bulgaria after a good life in America. There is no way to convince us that it is true
18 Erin_ answered
Honey, it's interesting and what kind of job will you find for her?
19 aristeguicnn answered
Why hasn't the story been moved to "Fictional Stories"? And who took so much time to read this novel that he believed her on top of everything?
20 simonpesuticn answered
I don't know how true it is ... but I really liked your story :) I think you only need to learn a little spelling (very little) and you are ready to be a writer! I'm waiting for a sequel!
21 analiestar answered
You are amazing! I admire people like you! xDD
22 pussycatnew answered
I'm actually 15 years old and I'm not a complex: e I have a personal life. I just woke up one night and sat on the computer and there was nothing to do about it, I wrote this story: D The truth is that the story is in "teenage" and not in "fictional", because I decided that the audience that decided to read what was written would be smart enough to guess that it was a phantasmagoria and would think me stupid enough to believe that you would think this to be true and my naivety would cause "LAUGHTER IN THE HALL" , and it happened lol and of course today's people find this funny so I decided to give you your then dose of laughter, because as I look there are some very evil creatures who can only be happy for a reason to rejoice and attack, so I took care of you! BAM. :)
23 ollie_collins answered
and sorry i disappointed number 14 lol
1 arumiyo answered
Well, your imagination works at 6. But just remembering that you are some big complex, who really wants to live the way I am sad in history. And let me tell you from these novels that he wrote about your expensive houses, that you lived somewhere and your parents' work made no sense. And for your father's work - don't look at so many discos!