Hello everyone, I am publishing a letter that I have to give to a person special to me in a week. I want to hear if it's too slimy or annoying. She's leaving in a month, and I want to tell her exactly how I feel. You are one of the most beautiful things that has ever happened to me. I don't know how I deserved you, but I'm grateful to have you by my side. When I tell you that I love you ... you don't always take it. You answer me, but this "I love you" is already like "Hello". Well, I want to tell you that's not the case. When I tell you, I feel it. Every thought that accompanies you is the most incredible thought in my life. I lived day by day, with the pain, and it passed somewhere along the way ... Or rather, when I met you. I did something with you for the first time - I fell in love ... Here are some of the little detailed in you that I adore .. When you think of something nice, your eyes smile, together with the lips. I know that every time we pass a stray dog or a person, your heart breaks. I know how much you like pink shoes and they are already waiting for you at home. I know you're smiling now. I know you have 5 small photos of your relatives that you are "hiding". I know how much you admire successful women and I am sure that when you graduate you will be among them. I know a thousand more things .. I know I love you .. This is the letter .. Please write reviews :)
1 aamir_araab99 answered
The idea is good, but your performance is a bit lame. In your quest to impress her (I guess), you use words and expressions out of place. Here is an example: "Every thought that accompanies you is the most incredible thought in my life." It is not clear at all what you mean. And your hyperbole is unnecessary. Not "every" thought can be "the most incredible." It's stupid, you know? Another thing - falling in love is not done, it happens. Fix it. I guess in "always" the mistake is spelling. The word is "as if." "Here are some of the small details" It says "some" for the plural, with "and". Remember something from me - there is no plural word ending in "J". I really liked the second half of the letter.