I walked the difficult path, I did not stop looking for love. And every one I met I asked. Are you what I'm willing to die for Are you the sense person? Are you space? Am I space? Can you and I be the cosmos? The answer was no, but I didn't stop. I fell, I got up, but I was moving forward. I tore down walls with the longing to see hope behind them. And one day behind the wall, it was you - the dream I looked at you and I saw it, the man I was looking for - I understood. And you saw it the same as I did and it became magic at that hour. But I was tired from the road, and you misunderstood him. He turned and left, but he made a mistake and it will weigh on me for the rest of my life.
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I like it, it's not bad.
Ah, this love ... It's good! I like it.
Full of god ... Are you space? Am I space?
Sorry, but it's really a little gray, somehow ... it's not very deep, as if it wasn't love, but just attraction. But keep writing :)
Only critics here. Come on number 4, write you a poem, giving criticism.
Here all the critics gathered genius never understood Here number 5 will oppose injustice and bad manners; How can poetry allow someone not to exalt somewhere ... It is dark in front of my eyes, a fierce wind is blowing in my ears. It is getting dark and the sky. Two universes were seen, but their happiness slept; Somewhere behind the wall, you will see the girl again one day, and when you ask in a couplet if she is, don't be disappointed with your "fate" ...