Cold Whiskey And Green Cigarettes ...

   She's great bro :) I really like her :)

   Not bad at all :)

   Thanks :) I haven't written for a long time and I think I'll start more seriously now

   Better a sparrow in the hand than a dove on the roof, brother ... Find a normal girl and you will pass the cold whiskey and green cigarettes! Otherwise you curl them well! Keep going - the next experience will be even better. And remember from me: there is NO BREAD in dealing with women! (There may be other things, but bread - no, on the contrary!)

   Well done author, I was moved :)) I love this style very much .. And what number 4 did he draw for you, as if after you wrote it it should follow that you are not happy in love .. It doesn't have to be a person unhappy in the present to be able to describe in verse, and in any way, any negative emotions. And there is always more to express about them - they are somehow more interesting ... The girl the author is talking about is from the past, or maybe it's a fantasy, why not? :)) But your talent is talent! Well done, keep conveying beautiful forms of emotions and feelings! I'm a girl.

   It's a fantasy :)

   It's great! The fourth verse is very strong :)

   And I like it, it's definitely different from everything here and the idea is not bad, it turned out well, and what does it matter to be a fantasy, my things that I write are also often the fruit of some fantasy, keep writing , I think you have talent (: Angel

   It's very nice, congratulations! Keep writing. :) :) :)