To a black corner, a black corner led me my way. There, in that darkness, I felt the cry, the agony of one's soul. I approached quickly and saw a girl on the floor I saw. She looked at me and she felt the pain in her soul. Her eyes were red, naive, childish, hurt. She's a weird, pretty girl, But why are you laughing, not singing like a bird I smelled blood running down my left and almost lifeless hand. With a knife she carved letters in the flesh "INSENSE" she wrote. A groan came from his tender mouth as if screaming, "I loved you, and you didn't even understand ..." I felt a breath beside me and saw a panting young man, tired. He fell to his knees beside her, leaning over her stop. He saw the wound with hot lips and kissed his left hand. A smile appeared in her heart when with bloody lips he, he kissed the pale face. He hugged the almost lifeless girl and returned the last smile on her face. The red blood touched the floor, and soon the girl was buried. The crushed young man hugged her for the last time and turned her knife to his body. I stood as if nailed in front of these bodies, the police came and unjustly doomed me to eternal darkness .. ATMTT What do you think?
1 jericay answered
Sad and strong, really! There are one or two mistakes, but we all make them. Otherwise, I really like the idea, and the title is exactly in my style. ~ sad-baby ~