Bushmills was silent and impatient. Everyone expected the long-awaited gift from God to appear. A week later, a baby was crying out to the village. A girl named Jen had been born. His voice was beautiful. With each passing day, it grew and became more beautiful. The years passed and by the time everyone felt it, she was a beautiful girl whose voice sounded like a nightingale. She loved to walk in the nearby forest, pick flowers and sing with the birds. She did not tire of this freedom, this carelessness. One day something different happened. When she left the house and went to the forest to pick blueberries, she heard a male voice. A young man was running after her, carrying a basket. The girl turned back and looked at him. He was carrying the basket she had dropped unconsciously. Maybe she had thought about what it was like to be loved. -Hey, stop! I missed something .. said the boy. "Um, thank you!" -You're beautiful! What is your name -Tell me yours first. -I asked first. -Jen-the girl answered -I'm Luke, I'm glad I met you! I'm sorry, but I have to go ... I hope to see you soon! -Bye, and thank you to her! Jen shouted after him. Now she knew what it was like to fall in love at first sight. She walked and smiled, she felt really happy. She secretly prayed to meet him again. By the time he realized he was in the woods. He began picking from the sweet berries and filling the basket. Every time Jen looked at the basket, she thought of Luke, and that smile came on her face again. Suddenly he heard footsteps. She turned, but there was no one behind her, and she continued to sing. A minute later he heard a voice, a familiar and pleasant voice. "You sing great," Luke said. "What are you doing here?" Jen asked in surprise, but still there was a hint of pleasure in seeing him -Well, I followed you, I didn't last long without you, strange as it may sound, because we've known each other for a very short time -I'm glad you're here. And so the love between the two ignited. Luke and Jen chased each other through the woods, laughing, eating blueberries, he giving her bouquets of fragrant flowers. Finally they got tired and lay down next to each other in the shade under a tree. -Jen, I have to tell you something. For the short time I was with you, I felt wonderful. It seemed that Luke would explain himself to her in love, but no matter how much Jen was in love, she would not give her heart to a stranger. Jen was a very smart girl, so she decided to see if Luke really liked her. She asked him a question that read: Where is the key to my heart? They had arranged to meet again the next day in the grove next to the tree full of memories. Then he had to answer her question. Thinking all night about the answer, Luke was ready in the morning. He went to the forest, to the meadow with the most beautiful flowers, where Jen had stood waiting for him. -Hello Jen! Glad to see you again! Well, I've been thinking about your question all night, and now I'm ready to answer it. You asked me where the key to your heart was. It is in you, at the moment your heart has a padlock that guards it well and no one can hurt you. All these wonderful moments we experienced, these smiles, all this makes the padlock crack and eventually break. Then your heart becomes free, only you can decide to whom to give it…. "Oh, Luke, you're wonderful!"
1 deeghose answered
Well, I don't want to offend you, but I didn't like the story. It is too superficial and short. It doesn't make any sense. And it's not about that really amazing feeling of LOVE. Rather, it is something too superficial. If you really want to write and get things done, you need to understand more about the meaning of things. To describe the feelings from the inside, not so superficially.